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Stories
« on: May 17, 2011, 12:53:24 PM »
No, this isn't like Story Time. These are stories, independant stories, written by you. It doesn't matter what genre they are, if they are short or long, as long as you've wrote them.

So, post away. I'll post a horror story in about half an hour or so.


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Re: Stories
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2011, 01:52:35 PM »
I once stumbled across a thread like this :P

lol jk

I find dreams make rather interesting, and quite crazy stories

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Re: Stories
« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2011, 01:53:47 PM »
I shot Picnic once.
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Re: Stories
« Reply #3 on: May 17, 2011, 01:56:40 PM »
A story, huh? Aight then, lemme find something decent enough and the correct rating...

I'll have it up ASAP
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Re: Stories
« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2011, 01:57:27 PM »
One day in a village, there was a robot builder called Frogface...



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Re: Stories
« Reply #5 on: May 17, 2011, 02:06:11 PM »
I eat sh**.

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Re: Stories
« Reply #6 on: May 17, 2011, 02:07:55 PM »
I eat sh**.
Is that why half the time, you're full of it?  :coolface



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Re: Stories
« Reply #7 on: May 17, 2011, 02:09:30 PM »
Not like th sh** in your head chocking your intelligence!

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Re: Stories
« Reply #8 on: May 17, 2011, 02:11:08 PM »
Not like th sh** in your head chocking your intelligence!
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Re: Stories
« Reply #9 on: May 17, 2011, 02:13:04 PM »
Back on topic!

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Re: Stories
« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2011, 02:13:33 PM »
Right. Anyway, I might work on something for this. Possibly RA2-related.



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Re: Stories
« Reply #11 on: May 17, 2011, 02:14:42 PM »
I've got something. It's unfinished, but I feel more comfortable working on it here.


(Note: The following is based on a true story. The real events which took place may have been changed for various reasons.)

The PS1 was a great console. It had some great games; one of the uncovered gems for the console is Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone for the PS1. It had a large storyline, good graphics for the time and was quite loyal to the original story. It was a good game; I know first-hand, I got the game a few days after I bought a PS1. The game itself was good, with me getting up to around the 60% mark on the first day. I was 5 years old at the time, and I was hooked. This game had drawn me more than any game I'd played since Gran Turismo. I stayed up until 10 o clock, just to finish the Hufflepuff chapter. Once I had, I didn't even remove the game. Just turned off the console and the TV and slithered into bed. I didn't even want a bedtime story; I just wanted to rest so I could prepare for the game once more in the morning.

That's where this story stops getting normal and starts getting flat-out creepy.

I woke up the day after. Same standard stuff, have my breakfast, get dressed, go to school and come back. For the rest of break time and dinner time, I was telling my friends about the game. Of course, they didn't care much; Yugioh was becoming quite big around then, so all they were interested in was if I had cards or not. After getting through school and coming home, I instantly sat down, shoved a DualShock controller into my palms and started playing; I was ready to have my house rocked by awesomeness once more.

Of course, that didn't happen.

When I started up the game, my save file was deleted. Some people say the PS1 memory cards are unreliable, but, this is not the case. This is the first and only time any of memory cards have deleted anything. Sure, some of my third-party memory cards have become corrupt and some of them may have deleted my Soul Calibur III saves, but they were problems on the PS2, NOT the PS1. I thought whatever, and started up the game as normal. Then I noticed something odd. The music, even though it sounded nearly exactly the same as I can remember, the music this time seemed to have more... malice in it. Something sinister hiding behind the notes. This put me on edge like I haven't experienced, ever, not even from Fatal Frame or Silent Hill. The only music that sounded the same was the music when you were meeting Dumbledore for the first time, but that's about it. I continued with the game as per normal, with the PS1 now having a more quiet maliciousness about it. I continued with the game, walking past the common room and moving up to the broomstick training place, as I had done before.

That's when I noticed: The background music had now completely cut out. All that was left in the terms of sound was the sound of some odd jingly things that sounded like wind chimes. As I entered the room where that ghost holding the candle floats through, the game kicked up the scariness to full throttle. The sound of the ghost was almost doubled, with the ghost seeming to follow you rather than going through the wall. This is when I noticed the textures of the game seemed less blurred, allowing me to see the ghost's face. It was quiet, yet twisted. Malicious, yet muted.  Terrifying, yet calming, all at the same time. After getting slowly creeped out by this, I ran off ahead, speaking to Ron at the start of the jump training thing. This time, unlike normal, I didn't have to talk to Ron. I could just walk through the door. The cut scene that would usually occur was also weird; there were no character models, not even Harry or Malfoy. Instead, there was an eerie silence of the PS1's motor gently spinning and a dark, quiet, low-pitched tone, meant to represent silence, but more representing tension. The cut scene only consisted of the camera angles, no subtitles, no nothing. The character model returned once the cut scene was over, and I carried on. Halfway through the first jumping training, to go meet Nearly Headless Nick, A subtitle box suddenly appeared, with the camera focusing, again, on the spot where Malfoy should have been. The subtitles said 'TURN BACK', all in bold.

At this point, I should have done as it said and talked to Ron. My mind was set solid that this was just a glitch, and that that's what I should do.

But I was intent on getting up to where I was. I pressed on.

As I got up to the part with Nearly Headless Nick, everything seemed normal. Everything he said was normal, apart for one or two dead pixels in the subtitles box, and then it continued like normal. However, as I was climbing the steps, I heard... voices. One of the portraits, of an old lady ,


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Re: Stories
« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2011, 02:19:15 PM »
Scrap, LDL (I think) and some of Scrap's friends and I were on MW2. We were boosting for headshots in FFA, when a player came in and killed us over and over.

We left the lobby after the match ended, and joined another lobby. The guy came back again and again!

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Re: Stories
« Reply #13 on: May 17, 2011, 02:50:44 PM »
Scrap, LDL (I think) and some of Scrap's friends and I were on MW2. We were boosting for headshots in FFA, when a player came in and killed us over and over.

We left the lobby after the match ended, and joined another lobby. The guy came back again and again!


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Re: Stories
« Reply #14 on: May 17, 2011, 02:58:51 PM »
lol a bunch of funny sh** has happened while playing cod or something else.

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Re: Stories
« Reply #15 on: May 17, 2011, 03:00:12 PM »
What about your new GT?

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« Reply #16 on: May 17, 2011, 03:05:43 PM »
What about your new GT?


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Re: Stories
« Reply #17 on: May 17, 2011, 03:06:48 PM »
I know.

Anyway, anyone heard the story of Lizzy Borden?

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Re: Stories
« Reply #18 on: May 17, 2011, 03:08:16 PM »
got banned for a third time so i need to make a new one hahahhahahah

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Re: Stories
« Reply #19 on: May 17, 2011, 03:25:13 PM »
I know.

Anyway, anyone heard the story of Lizzy Borden?

Nope, tell me.


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