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Robot Arena => Showcases => Stock Showcases => Topic started by: drakemike22 on February 11, 2014, 09:34:11 PM

Title: Drake Garage
Post by: drakemike22 on February 11, 2014, 09:34:11 PM
Here is my first bot be brutal
(http://i1315.photobucket.com/albums/t583/drakemike22/firstattempet_zps206a2000.png) (http://s1315.photobucket.com/user/drakemike22/media/firstattempet_zps206a2000.png.html)
(http://i1315.photobucket.com/albums/t583/drakemike22/firstattempedatstock_zps943d47d3.png) (http://s1315.photobucket.com/user/drakemike22/media/firstattempedatstock_zps943d47d3.png.html)
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: drakemike22 on February 11, 2014, 11:27:15 PM
if possible could someone show me how to AI this bot i wanna learn as much as i can Thanks
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: rnifnuf on February 12, 2014, 12:05:50 AM
I like how eager you are to learn. However, I would really work on improving building skills first. While your bot isn't the worst first bot I've ever seen, some things really need to change. Your biggest priorities are to make the bot invertible (able to drive upside-down) and to shrink the chassis size. Making the bot invertible would eliminate the need for a self-righting mechanism, or a srimech, leaving weight for more weapons. Shrinking the size of the chassis would leave more weight leftover for more weapons. As for your weapon choice, you're doing it right; maces are excellent weapons in Stock, alongside razor tips, iron spikes, and bear claws*.

If you really want to learn, then check out the showcases of other, more experienced members. Two really good Stock showcases that you could potentially learn a lot from are the showcases of Sage and Mr.AwesumSauce as well as Mechadino. You could also look at some building tutorials, the most famous being the one from the GTM admin Clickbeetle, which is found here (http://beetlebros.gametechmods.com/ra2techs.htm).

Other than that, welcome to Gametechmods! Stay for the ride, do something cool, don't be "that guy", and you will gain the respect of your peers.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Avalanche on February 12, 2014, 02:19:42 AM
Are you trying for IRL? If so, dsl is your friend
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Naryar on February 12, 2014, 04:17:35 AM
-More weapons.
-That burst isn't enough to selfright your bot, try a stronger one (aka heavier one)
-Ramplates are not of much use here.
-Raise that baseplate anchor and save 4 kg for something else.
-Build to MW weight limit, aka 400 kg.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Badnik96 on February 12, 2014, 08:03:21 AM
It really isn't bad for a first robot. First thing I'd do is get rid of the srimech entirely (Your bot's invertible already, you can see the wheels poking out of the chassis) and use the weight used on the Snapper to get some more weapons.

Also, I'd read this if you haven't already:
http://beetlebros.gametechmods.com/ra2techs.htm (http://beetlebros.gametechmods.com/ra2techs.htm)
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Naryar on February 12, 2014, 08:28:57 AM
Are you trying for IRL? If so, dsl is your friend

Let him learn to build first before he chooses his stance on IRL/DSL-S.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: drakemike22 on February 12, 2014, 10:39:38 AM
Thanks for the tips guys im going to rework this bot
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Mr. AS on February 12, 2014, 01:59:09 PM
SO...
You might want to invest in a tribar instead of a disk for a design like this.
Putting ramplates on the SIDE of your bot generally is a waste of weight. At the most you need 1 plow at the front.
Internal Z-teks are generally a waste of weight, especially when you could just put them on baseplate anchors.
A srimech is also a waste of weight (despite what naryar says about getting a heavier burst) when you could just make the bot invertible.
You should switch the black battery out for a nifty battery.

You could try setting up some armor and the weapon is you used snapper loading: https://gametechmods.com/forums/index.php?topic=4512.0 (https://gametechmods.com/forums/index.php?topic=4512.0) .

Good wheel choice. There are lighter wheels such as shiny hub wheels (which you could switch to if they provide invertibility), but grannys are almost ensured invertibility on this.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: drakemike22 on February 13, 2014, 02:41:59 PM
ok here is an update i think im gunna switch back to a disk with maces for the weapon but im not sure
(http://i1315.photobucket.com/albums/t583/drakemike22/robot_zps9c9a163a.png) (http://s1315.photobucket.com/user/drakemike22/media/robot_zps9c9a163a.png.html)
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Wacky Bob on February 13, 2014, 05:02:00 PM
Definitely replace the lawnmower blade. I would use a tri-bar.

You should change the wheels back to Slipperbottoms. Those, Shiny Hubs, and Rubber Wheels are really the only ones that should be used.

Most importantly, make it as close to the weight limit as possible. You can make changes that require more weight (such as using HP Z-Teks for the drive motors instead of using regular ones) and still have the bot be a middleweight. So you can add almost 70 more kgs of components without it becoming a heavyweight.

Lightweights: 248.9
Middleweights: 398.9
Heavyweights: 800.0

For a beginner, it's a pretty good bot. I see you've mostly gotten space management down.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: rnifnuf on February 13, 2014, 05:37:50 PM
I know that you're trying to improve, but you actually worsened the bot. Here are some ways you could improve the bot:


Most importantly: read the tutorials and lurk in the showcases. Lurking is the act of studying the showcases of experienced builders, while not posting in the showcases. Trust me, this is a good idea, and it will help you become a better builder.

Also, what is the armor?
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Naryar on February 14, 2014, 12:53:48 AM
Go back to your previous weapon, wheel and motor choice, it was better.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: KOS on February 14, 2014, 05:58:09 AM
Thats pretty good for a first bot  :claping, however, from what i can see you can probably lower the chassis a tad more, and mount the hp z-tek directly from a 90 Base plate anchor to save weight. Most importantly though, get rid of the lawnmower blade (its horrible for a weapon) and replace it with a tri-bar with razor tips(or iron spikes or maces) on the end.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: drakemike22 on February 14, 2014, 11:26:55 AM
ok made some changes and it has steel armor
(http://i1315.photobucket.com/albums/t583/drakemike22/robot_zps26f30e92.png) (http://s1315.photobucket.com/user/drakemike22/media/robot_zps26f30e92.png.html)
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: rnifnuf on February 14, 2014, 12:25:44 PM
Much better. However, there are still some glaring issues (important terms in bold):


Keep up the good work, and stay good.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Wacky Bob on February 14, 2014, 06:06:45 PM
I love how you don't leave a giant amount of empty space in your bot. That's a common mistake for beginners.

Definitely use the DSA glitch rnifnuf mentioned. It will give you more weight to use, and strengthen your bot.

Don't point the extenders down like that. Use the attachment points on the ends of the extenders so the weapons reach out more. You'll also be able to put more weapons on the extenders. If you're only going to have one weapon on each end of the tri-bar, you probably shouldn't use extenders at all. It will waste weight.

You might want to consider using just one weapon motor with more weapons on it.

It's a major improvement from the last one, though.
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: drakemike22 on February 15, 2014, 01:51:07 AM
ok final time with this bot lol dsa armor more maces and turned over tri bars also im gunna redo the chassis slightly to get into middle weight class
(http://i1315.photobucket.com/albums/t583/drakemike22/robot_zps40cad555.png) (http://s1315.photobucket.com/user/drakemike22/media/robot_zps40cad555.png.html)
Title: Re: Drake Garage
Post by: Naryar on February 15, 2014, 02:47:52 AM
Better. Less empty space, now.