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Is this good enough? (answer is yes)
« on: September 24, 2013, 07:44:27 PM »
Keep in mind that this is Grade 8.
I needed to answer these four questions in paragraph form.



1. Biology is a natural science that studies the structure, function, growth, and evolution of living organisms. These organisms can include fungi, plants, animals, humans, micro-organisms, etc.

2. Biology has been involved of in the discovery of many major discoveries, such as the discovery of evolution, the discovery of extinct species and many more.

2/3. Biology has mainly had a significant effect in medical breakthroughs. There have been medical breakthroughs as a result of the discovery of infectious micro-organisms, discovery of the essential minerals, nutrients and vitamins in foods, the discovery of the role of oxygen, the discovery of the structure and importance of proteins, and the discovery of the structure and function of DNA and RNA. These discoveries have made it possible to classify and treat many diseases and disorders.

4. There are many branches of science related to Biology. Some major branches include Agriculture (the science of farming), Anatomy (the science of bodily structure), Ecology (the science of the ecosystem), Chemistry (the science of substances of matter), Oceanography (the science of the physical and biological properties of the sea) and many more.

We had two classes to work on this.

Are these good answers?

(EDIT) Fixed #4 and improved #3.
(EDIT #2) Fixed #1
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Re: Is this good enough?
« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2013, 07:47:28 PM »
Sure.
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Re: Is this good enough?
« Reply #2 on: September 24, 2013, 07:53:39 PM »
1) Paragraphs are generally longer than 1 sentence.


2)  It asks for three things, I assume your teacher wants one of each


3) There HAVE, but otherwise good


4) Dunno exactly how to buff it up but you definitely need more than a list.

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Re: Is this good enough?
« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2013, 07:56:45 PM »
Thanks Sonny. Will do.
EDIT: #2 says OR so I don't think I need to do that.
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Re: Is this good enough?
« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2013, 05:30:06 PM »
Got 100%
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Re: Is this good enough? (answer is yes)
« Reply #5 on: October 03, 2013, 05:47:47 PM »
Pah. Simple definition, simple minds.
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Re: Is this good enough? (answer is yes)
« Reply #6 on: October 03, 2013, 06:36:57 PM »
i dont know why the teacher didnt automatically give you an F for writing 1-2 sentence paragraphs instead of detailed 6+ sentence paragraphs, but gj anyways.
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Re: Is this good enough? (answer is yes)
« Reply #7 on: October 03, 2013, 06:37:53 PM »
He just said paragraph format.
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Re: Is this good enough? (answer is yes)
« Reply #8 on: October 03, 2013, 06:41:26 PM »
so like, did you only need to write 1 paragraph or 4?
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How you make Alarm Clock Pizza is:
Step 1: You buy an alarm clock from the store, and then you have to break it and put it in the sauce.
Step 2: Fold the sauce in 5 slices and put it in the dough.
Step 3: Paint the eggs with a pitcher of a clock showing what time you want to wake up and eat pizza for breakfast.
Step 4: Put the eggs in the dough.
Step 5: Make it flat into a round shape and draw the time you want on it.
Step 6: Put some old steel to prevent other peple from stealing it.
Step 7: Make it flat and cut into 60 slices 1 for each minute in 1 our.
Step 8: Put in the oven set the timer to 30048813.2884 seconds and put the temperature on 'Volcano' setting.
Step 9: If you think it is take to long, then get yor alarm clock and set it to now so that it will ring and you can take it out.
Step 10: Take it out uv the uvin wen it is redy and go to bed. In the morning eat pizza and also eat yor hands bi mistake.

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Re: Is this good enough? (answer is yes)
« Reply #9 on: October 03, 2013, 06:43:53 PM »
I think he was looking for full sentences, not point form. He'd probably say paragraphs instead of paragraph format.
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