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Here it is:

lol what

Let me guess, you didn't even read it.

i did and i was surprised at the lack of the word "blood"

Quote from: freeziez on August 22, 2014, 09:37:18 PM

i did and i was surprised at the lack of the word "blood"

It DOES have the word "bleeding".
Besides, I was... creative.

good job

A-am I supposed to be impressed?

Windows XP creepypasta, this is probably the closest to scary you can get with it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rYys5o7vwe4 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rYys5o7vwe4)

Dunno about anyone else but I enjoyed that.

The one thing that really removes my immersion from creepypastas are anachronisms. There's only one, but it's quite a big one.

Windows 7 did not come out until 2009. This story is supposed to be set in 2005, after Hurricane Katrina, unless I'm very much mistaken?

Quote from: AlexGRFan97 on August 25, 2014, 05:13:34 PM

The one thing that really removes my immersion from creepypastas are anachronisms. There's only one, but it's quite a big one.
Windows 7 did not come out until 2009. This story is supposed to be set in 2005, after Hurricane Katrina, unless I'm very much mistaken?

...oops.

Change it to Windows XP. Nothing changes.

what a waste of my time

K, here's my Creepypasta:

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/We_Kept_Driving (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/We_Kept_Driving)

heer's mi crepypast (http://pastebin.com/tTQYwiBY)

Here I did one too:

The day started like any other. The sun was shining, the birds were chirping, and I was locked in my room, scouring the internet for the 27th consecutive hour. Out of nowhere, a certain link caught my eye.
”Big Rigs: Over the Road Racing: ‘13 Update,” I read. I read it again, out loud this time, because it seemed more dramatic.
Naturally, I was confused. Of course I had heard of this hilarious failure of a game, but I had no idea that it was still being worked on as recently as 2013.
”It has to be a mod or something,” I announced to the empty room. Why anyone would want to mod Big Rigs was beyond me, but my curiosity had been sparked. I clicked the link.
The link led me to an unremarkable page. The page’s background was pure black, with rotating pentagrams scattered about. A download link, in a large, bright red font, was located in the center of the page. It was labeled, “B1G_R1G5:_0V3R_TH3_R04D_R4(1NG.exe.” Having determined the page to be sufficiently trustworthy, I clicked the link. The file downloaded in exactly 13 seconds, then launched itself. After loading for approximately 6.66 seconds, it covered my monitor with the Big Rigs title screen. I studied it for a while, and didn’t notice anything being out of place, save for the fact that there was a hyper-realistic skeleton hiding behind each of the menu options. Satisfied, I began a race. I picked the green truck, and chose the course “Devil Passage.”
The race began normally. There was no music, and the opposing truck slowly lumbered its way off the starting line. I quickly passed my opponent, and decided to play around a bit. My truck, as usual, could climb sheer cliffs, pass through buildings, and accelerate to impossible speeds when in reverse. I couldn’t figure out what the “‘13 Update” had actually changed. I returned to the road to check on the opposing truck, and found that it had, as expected, crawled around the track only to stop just short of the finish line. I approached the other truck, when suddenly the ground below it began rippling. A huge mouth, covered with flames, emerged from the ground and swallowed the other truck whole. The sound of crunching metal mixed with hyper-realistic screaming as the mouth returned to the ground from which it came.
”That’s new,” I commented. Unimpressed, I decided to try out another trick. I held down the key to make my truck move forward until I managed to reach the gray void surrounding the map. I continued through the void for a while, until I noticed some sort of speck on the horizon. Intrigued, I decided to head towards it. After a while of not making any progress, I had the idea to turn the truck around. Going backwards, I approached the speck much faster, and was soon able to make out more detail on the object. It was a house that, as I got closer, I realized looked exactly like my house, down to the finest details. Naturally, I wanted to know if the inside was also a perfect replica, so I continued towards it. Unfortunately, just as my truck touched the wall of the house, the game froze. I tried to alt-tab out of the game, to no avail.
Suddenly, the game’s familiar three-handled trophy appeared on the screen. However, instead of the laughable “You’re Winner!” victory message, it now displayed the much more sinister message, “You’re Loser!”
”You’re… loser?” I read aloud, confused.
Suddenly, the green truck that I had been using in the game burst through my wall, still driving at an incredible speed in reverse. The truck was headed directly for me, and I had no time to react.
As expected, the truck passed harmlessly through everything in the room, and left harmlessly through the opposite wall.
——————
I never did find out exactly where that truck came from, or where it went. It seems likely that it’s still out there, somewhere, failing to crash into anything and everything in its way. But I do know this: that truck, and it’s entirely harmless actions, have haunted my thoughts ever since.

this is s very true story

one night i had a dream
it was about robot arena
i dreamt i had the source code
when i woke up i went to gtm
in my pm box was the source code
:OOOOOOOO
spooky

one day i saw a spooky skeleton i didnt send it to 6 ppl then i was eaten by skeletons

(n)spooky(n+2)me

thank mr skeltal

gametechmods

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