Author Topic: Dont dance III out now (Read 3510 times)

playzooki · « **on:** December 30, 2014, 03:58:05 AM »

https://playzooki.bandcamp.com/album/dont-dance-iii

NeighImACarrot · « **Reply #1 on:** December 30, 2014, 06:06:55 AM »

Just stop

HurricaneAndrew · « **Reply #2 on:** December 30, 2014, 01:26:49 PM »

helloface · « **Reply #3 on:** December 30, 2014, 01:27:56 PM »

Kurt Cobain yourself.

MassimoV · « **Reply #4 on:** December 30, 2014, 01:46:32 PM »

Problems:
-Album art is unappealing
-The name has been used too many times at this point. Use your brain and come up with a different name.
-No one's paying money for this. Make your stuff free until you're good.
-No one listens to 20 minute songs except for really pretentious ****s. I know you're going to be all like, "hurr but this black metal song is long as James Cameron's Avatar." Well no one here gives a sh** about your music taste. Also this isn't black metal.
-The drums sound artificial.
-It's too monotonous.
-All the instruments sound like they're coming through a Midi Keyboard which isn't necessarily bad, just the way you've done it, it isn't refined.

playzooki · « **Reply #5 on:** December 30, 2014, 01:52:27 PM »

Quote from: MassimoV on December 30, 2014, 01:46:32 PM

Problems:
-Album art is unappealing
-The name has been used too many times at this point. Use your brain and come up with a different name.
the dont dance name is used as a joke to piss certain people off.
-No one's paying money for this. Make your stuff free until you're good.
-No one listens to 20 minute songs except for really pretentious ****s. I know you're going to be all like, "hurr but this black metal song is long as James Cameron's Avatar." Well no one here gives a sh** about your music taste. Also this isn't black metal.
its a 40 minute song split into 2 parts. :P There are quite a few one song albums out there
-The drums sound artificial.
ok
-It's too monotonous.
fair point
-All the instruments sound like they're coming through a Midi Keyboard which isn't necessarily bad, just the way you've done it, it isn't refined.
ill take this into account

Badnik96 · « **Reply #6 on:** December 30, 2014, 02:13:45 PM »

It'd probably sound better if you used a soundfont of some kind, yeah. Midis are lame.

playzooki · « **Reply #7 on:** December 30, 2014, 02:29:25 PM »

Quote from: Badnik96 on December 30, 2014, 02:13:45 PM

It'd probably sound better if you used a soundfont of some kind, yeah. Midis are lame.

I did use a soundfont :P

helloface · « **Reply #8 on:** December 30, 2014, 04:08:03 PM »

lol did Naryar really mute gayjewki for this

Agaton · « **Reply #9 on:** December 30, 2014, 04:44:59 PM »

Certainly some time was spent and though this isnt for me, theres a few nice riffs in there. Bottom line is that as long as you're having fun making music you should keep doing it.

NeighImACarrot · « **Reply #10 on:** December 30, 2014, 05:26:47 PM »

Quote from: Agaton on December 30, 2014, 04:44:59 PM

Certainly some time was spent and though this isnt for me, theres a few nice riffs in there. Bottom line is that as long as you're having fun making music you should keep doing it.

No he really shouldnt.

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #11 on:** December 30, 2014, 06:08:30 PM »

Quote from: NeighImACarrot on December 30, 2014, 05:26:47 PM

Quote from: Agaton on December 30, 2014, 04:44:59 PM
Certainly some time was spent and though this isnt for me, theres a few nice riffs in there. Bottom line is that as long as you're having fun making music you should keep doing it.
No he really shouldnt.

How are you going to stop him? By crying here in GTM?

Jaydee99 · « **Reply #12 on:** December 31, 2014, 07:04:15 PM »

Haha I can see an argument coming on....

Anyway what's this? You posted it to Piss people off? That's hilarious. Why three illuminate logo's and charging for this? You make me laugh!
Keep uploading random ass stuff like this and you'll be banned!

RedAce · « **Reply #13 on:** December 31, 2014, 07:25:04 PM »

My thoughts are pretty much what MassimoV suggested along with the thoughts I had about your last album. Once again, they aren't terrible to the point where I never want to listen to it again, but honestly, I wouldn't listen to this during my down time.

Rating: 5.0/10

toAst · « **Reply #14 on:** January 01, 2015, 10:24:31 PM »

cut it down to minute long blasts and lose the repetition. get some better drum sounds or i can send you some, then run it through a humanizer plugin. if you cant get a better guitar sound try running it out of your computer into an amp and micing it to record and you could probably be better than half of the 'nintendo-core' bands on myspace. maybe ill yell all over it and spit shine it for a kick if you take my advice

its not exactly good right now but theres something there if you really grind your elbows into it

toAst · « **Reply #15 on:** January 01, 2015, 10:28:24 PM »

oh come on what wet pussy muted the guy

MassimoV · « **Reply #16 on:** January 01, 2015, 10:45:00 PM »

Quote from: toAst on January 01, 2015, 10:28:24 PM

oh come on what wet pussy muted the guy

Naryar

Badnik96 · « **Reply #17 on:** January 02, 2015, 02:38:38 AM »

did he seriously get muted for this

who let naryar be a mod again

helloface · « **Reply #18 on:** January 02, 2015, 02:42:46 AM »

Quote from: Badnik96 on January 02, 2015, 02:38:38 AM

did he seriously get muted for this

who let naryar be a mod again

I don't actually blame frenchie for one, I mean it is pretty awful. It's genetic "metal" with no real instruments and no lyrics, so basically it's even worse than dubstep.

Badnik96 · « **Reply #19 on:** January 02, 2015, 02:44:43 AM »

so posting sh**ty music gets you muted now

okay