Playzooki's Terri-bad DSL showcase.

[ty4er]

it's underweight, it looks horrible, the weapon isnt good enough and jesus christ what is that skin

[playzooki]

it's underweight, it looks horrible, the weapon isnt good enough and jesus christ what is that skin

it's the "i cba to skin so ill reuse another skin" skin

[playzooki]

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394.something

[MassimoV]

it's underweight, it looks horrible, the weapon isnt good enough and jesus christ what is that skin

it's the "i cba to skin so ill reuse another skin" skin

Doesn't me it still doesn't suck.

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394.something

Very boring and generic.

[playzooki]

238.something
4 or 3 ants
slimbody drive
piglet weapon

[MassimoV]

Use an ME instead of a baseplate anchor. Build to the weigh limit.

[playzooki]

Use an ME instead of a baseplate anchor. Build to the weigh limit.

does it matter that much in irl? if it does, ill add weight.

[MassimoV]

Yes, it saves you weight that you can use on other componets. It is also smaller, which is good for a tighter chassis. Just cause you build IRL doesn't mean you should use crap components.

[helloface]

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394.something

Not too bad, but you need to show the insides. However...

Very boring and generic.

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238.something
4 or 3 ants
slimbody drive
piglet weapon

Good, but it needs a better skin, use MEs instead of baseplates, and build to the weight limit.

[playzooki]

Yes, it saves you weight that you can use on other componets. It is also smaller, which is good for a tighter chassis. Just cause you build IRL doesn't mean you should use crap components.

i meant the weight limit. i cba to take a screenie but i upgraded to 2 titanium and 1 steel skirt.

[090901]

I would widen the chassis so it's the same width as the skirts.
I also feel that a smaller disc and angled skirts at the sides would look better.

[Mr. AS]

it's underweight, it looks horrible, the weapon isnt good enough and jesus christ what is that skin

Very boring and generic.

PROTIP: if you want him to get any better, just saying "oh yeah that sucks" isn't going to help at all. massimov's second peice of advice and 090901's post are true though.

the axle support is slightly off-center from the actual center of the disc, and a few angled flippermakers as motor protection would look cool.

[ty4er]

it's underweight, it looks horrible, the weapon isnt good enough and jesus christ what is that skin

Very boring and generic.

PROTIP: if you want him to get any better, just saying "oh yeah that sucks" isn't going to help at all. massimov's second peice of advice and 090901's post are true though.

idk what you think i said but by saying it's underweight and saying the weapon isn't good (bad wording, meant substantial) enough, i'm sure someone with some sense would think 'i can add more weapons'.

anyway the new bot is way too small. make it bigger, give it a better wedge and lower the disk so the axle support lines up. and use a multi extender instead of an anchor

[Naryar]

Advice and criticism are needed in equal parts. I see both here, what's the problem ?

[MassimoV]

it's underweight, it looks horrible, the weapon isnt good enough and jesus christ what is that skin

Very boring and generic.

PROTIP: if you want him to get any better, just saying "oh yeah that sucks" isn't going to help at all. massimov's second peice of advice and 090901's post are true though.

the axle support is slightly off-center from the actual center of the disc, and a few angled flippermakers as motor protection would look cool.

In the end though, I don't know how to make it better. I guess, lurk in other showcases. But I try not building things like that cause there are already so many, bricks with a drum on front. You can add spikes and armor to style it but come on, really? I don't want to say, "Just don't build bots like that," cause you know, I want him to build and showcase.

[playzooki]

I want him to build and showcase.

Ok then:

Nar AI 3, Alu 3, 2 blacks, 2 hypnos on slimbodys, Perm 80 weapon. Rest you can see

[Naryar]

more drive, heavier weapon motor as well

[Mystic2000]

Weak ass weapon motor, fail drive, no popup protection, need i say more ?

[Tweedy]

The shell looks quite big as well.

[AlexGRFan97]

In addition to the previous advice, who uses a hollow disc on the top? You either use armored or solid discs.