Author Topic: Jonzu95's Showcase (Read 79103 times)

Jonzu95 · « **on:** May 23, 2009, 05:42:16 PM »

This is my first Antweight robot named: Black Hole

So, I ask for you. What do you think?

Urjak · « **Reply #1 on:** May 23, 2009, 05:52:09 PM »

Don't mix DSL and stock. As for the bot, not that bad for a first AW.

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #2 on:** May 23, 2009, 05:58:00 PM »

ok... thanks for advice. :)

roboman2444 · « **Reply #3 on:** May 23, 2009, 06:17:35 PM »

pretty good for a first aw
to build even better bots goto http://beetlebros.gametechmods.com/tutorials.htm

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #4 on:** May 23, 2009, 06:46:03 PM »

This is my Radiation I (I created this long time ago)

R1885 · « **Reply #5 on:** May 23, 2009, 06:47:51 PM »

And what does it do?

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #6 on:** May 23, 2009, 06:48:58 PM »

It has only 2 flippers and 3 Supervolt batterys & 2 Z-teks (HP)

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #7 on:** May 23, 2009, 06:57:59 PM »

And this is Radiation II. It has 2 Supervolt batterys, 2 Z-teks (HP), ZZT Ultimate Z-Tek & 2 Flippers. I put bots inside pictures later.

R1885 · « **Reply #8 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:03:25 PM »

You failed with the extenders. Round ones have the same HP as a square extender.

And never use custom parts.

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #9 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:05:41 PM »

yep. I know that the extenders went wrong but I like mixed bots like DSL, Stock and customs in 1 bot... It makes it easily too.

Somebody · « **Reply #10 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:10:44 PM »

ALWAYS keep stock parts with stock bots vs. stock AI bots

ALWAYS keep DSL parts with DSL bots vs. DSL AI bots.

NEVER MIX

Never use custom components on a serious bot.

ALWAYS try to show inside shots (unless it is a secret)

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #11 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:14:30 PM »

Now, here is Radiation III. I know that I failed with the extenders but always new Radiations are better than others

R1885 · « **Reply #12 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:18:47 PM »

DSL PARTS!
Other wise, decent.

Jack Daniels · « **Reply #13 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:19:07 PM »

Quote from: Jonzu95;40275

yep. I know that the extenders went wrong but I like mixed bots like DSL, Stock and customs in 1 bot... It makes it easily too.

What you like is what you like... we can respect that. However... pretty much most of the people on this forum prefer to keep Stock and DSL separate. You wont get much positive feedback on your showcase if you mix them because people here like to help one or the other. Mixing things up is considered "hobby like" because the hardcore builders make bots that compete in either DSL or Stock. Custom components don't garner much respect because they dont really show what you can do as a builder. If you want respect show that you can improve within the boundaries of Stock or DSL. People will give you feedback and make you a better builder.

If you are going to mix bots and use custom components don't expect a lot of positive feedback on the forums because there is really nothing special about custom components other than they are custom.

You can impress the forum members if you build and improve without custom components. Your bot looks cool though, I have hopes that you will grow as a builder with our help. Stick around and take the advice... it may seem cold and critical but it will make your building experience challenging and fun.

Urjak · « **Reply #14 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:27:56 PM »

Very nicely said.

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #15 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:28:44 PM »

I promise... I will make great Stock & (Maybe) DSL Bot(s) but I show Fourth Radiation and Radiations inside and then I make the bots.

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #16 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:32:16 PM »

So, here is the latest Radiation: IV! These are my olds bots that I build before I joined to the gametechmods forums.

Somebody · « **Reply #17 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:35:03 PM »

Good job on the weight limit. Always build to it.

R1885 · « **Reply #18 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:35:44 PM »

Still Custom parts, but still decent.

Jonzu95 · « **Reply #19 on:** May 23, 2009, 07:44:13 PM »

And the last one pic of Radiations P.S. All Radations Armors are Steel