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Other Tutorials / Re: Jaydee's AI guide for beginner's.
« on: December 10, 2014, 10:54:35 AM »
My input:
There are two exact same slides ('AIing the robot')
Overlapping issues (text going on top of pictures or pictures on top of text)
Make the screenshots lighter (covered by Craaig, looks like you took a picture with your phone and not screenshot)
Text coming of the slide (covered by Craaig)
Unnecessary capital letters (one example is on Craaig's screenshot, another example is putting a capital of 'Place' after a comma.)
There's a title template on slide 3
You've bullet-pointed numbers that you already gave your own bullet-points for
'For a Rammer robot, this is all a robot needs. Skip to' Was this meant to be added to? Does it mean 'Skip two', as in two slides? Or was it meant to say 'Skip to *page number/name*'
Keep a format for font size. Looks better on the eyes and more professional. If you can't fit all the text on to one slide with your chosen format, just make a part 2 on the next slide.
'Thanks to Trovaneer' Ha ha. Just check your spelling and grammar in places. Another example is that you spelled 'none' without the 'e'.
These are small things (in the most part) but when you list them like this, it doesn't look good. A presentation that doesn't present itself very well just looks untidy and puts the person reading it off and they'll close it down thinking some kid made it with no knowledge of AIing. I don't think that about you but random people from outside of GTM might.
This is just feedback, so don't think I am bashing you, as I am just telling you what you need to improve.
There are two exact same slides ('AIing the robot')
Overlapping issues (text going on top of pictures or pictures on top of text)
Make the screenshots lighter (covered by Craaig, looks like you took a picture with your phone and not screenshot)
Text coming of the slide (covered by Craaig)
Unnecessary capital letters (one example is on Craaig's screenshot, another example is putting a capital of 'Place' after a comma.)
There's a title template on slide 3
You've bullet-pointed numbers that you already gave your own bullet-points for
'For a Rammer robot, this is all a robot needs. Skip to' Was this meant to be added to? Does it mean 'Skip two', as in two slides? Or was it meant to say 'Skip to *page number/name*'
Keep a format for font size. Looks better on the eyes and more professional. If you can't fit all the text on to one slide with your chosen format, just make a part 2 on the next slide.
'Thanks to Trovaneer' Ha ha. Just check your spelling and grammar in places. Another example is that you spelled 'none' without the 'e'.
These are small things (in the most part) but when you list them like this, it doesn't look good. A presentation that doesn't present itself very well just looks untidy and puts the person reading it off and they'll close it down thinking some kid made it with no knowledge of AIing. I don't think that about you but random people from outside of GTM might.
This is just feedback, so don't think I am bashing you, as I am just telling you what you need to improve.