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Robot Arena => Showcases => DSL TC Showcases => Topic started by: Wambo on January 18, 2019, 05:27:06 AM

Title: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 18, 2019, 05:27:06 AM
Here I want to showcase my robots I built with DSL and IRL. :mrgreen:
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Dark-Al on January 18, 2019, 05:36:07 AM
If you're going to make a showcase, could you please post us a screenshot of one of the bots you made, instead of just announcing that you wanted to make a showcase? 
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 18, 2019, 05:47:19 AM
If you're going to make a showcase, could you please post us a screenshot of one of the bots you made, instead of just announcing that you wanted to make a showcase?
just in a few minutes ok? :mrgreen:
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 18, 2019, 06:02:59 AM
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Mayby some People know the previous Version of the bot from thr Orc's Wars 3 qualifiing.
This is an improved Version, which is Looking and working better.
The Wheel guards look a bit weird, but I will Change this in future builds.
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Dreamcast on January 18, 2019, 06:28:26 AM
Either zoom in closer, use two pictures of your robot or crop your pictures.

As for the robot, it looks acceptable. There's something about the tiny "hands" over the discs that I don't like. Try making them thicker if possible.
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 18, 2019, 08:34:36 AM
Either zoom in closer, use two pictures of your robot or crop your pictures.

As for the robot, it looks acceptable. There's something about the tiny "hands" over the discs that I don't like. Try making them thicker if possible.
Thank you for the tip :smile:
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 20, 2019, 07:40:07 AM
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Here's a new robot!
If you have any improvements, post them  :mrgreen:
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Billy5545 on January 20, 2019, 07:52:59 AM
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Here's a new robot!
If you have any improvements, post them  :mrgreen:
For that one, I will first prefer a different name. Headache is already taken by an axebot on Orc's Wars Overclocked, and I'm not a fan of same name tbh.

As for the construct, looks pretty neat imo, aside from the front plow, as I think the angled plate should blend with the wheelguards, and the somewhat exposed burst for axe, though that's minor as you at least make it look blend in with the extenderwork around it. I'll also suggest you make the counterweights blend with the rest of the axe shaft. It looks awkward sticking out like that from the shaft.

Also, what is the weight and battery amount, just wondering
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: TheOrcCorp on January 20, 2019, 07:59:42 AM
For that one, I will first prefer a different name. Headache is already taken by an axebot on Orc's Wars Overclocked, and I'm not a fan of same name tbh.
Billy, you can't just say "you can't use this name as it's already taken in a tournament." Let the guy name the robot what he wants. Sickle named a robot Gnaw, you see me complaining?

Anyway, Wambo: this is looking pretty good! The very front of the wedge looks a bit too elongated and I'm not sure what the back green bit is but it looks like a decent bot! Only other things I'd suggest is 1. Needs some more defensive wheelguards and 2. Putting the weight of the robot on your splashes would be great too!
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 21, 2019, 12:25:25 AM
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Here's a new robot!
If you have any improvements, post them  :mrgreen:
For that one, I will first prefer a different name. Headache is already taken by an axebot on Orc's Wars Overclocked, and I'm not a fan of same name tbh.

As for the construct, looks pretty neat imo, aside from the front plow, as I think the angled plate should blend with the wheelguards, and the somewhat exposed burst for axe, though that's minor as you at least make it look blend in with the extenderwork around it. I'll also suggest you make the counterweights blend with the rest of the axe shaft. It looks awkward sticking out like that from the shaft.

Also, what is the weight and battery amount, just wondering
Sorry, I didn't know, that the Name was forgiven and the weight is 797,5
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 21, 2019, 12:27:23 AM
For that one, I will first prefer a different name. Headache is already taken by an axebot on Orc's Wars Overclocked, and I'm not a fan of same name tbh.
Billy, you can't just say "you can't use this name as it's already taken in a tournament." Let the guy name the robot what he wants. Sickle named a robot Gnaw, you see me complaining?

Anyway, Wambo: this is looking pretty good! The very front of the wedge looks a bit too elongated and I'm not sure what the back green bit is but it looks like a decent bot! Only other things I'd suggest is 1. Needs some more defensive wheelguards and 2. Putting the weight of the robot on your splashes would be great too!
Thank you  :mrgreen: The back Thing is the tail. Such as Terrorhurtz it has a tail, in order to not bounce around that much.
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: KidDelta on January 21, 2019, 03:30:11 AM
It's good! Just tell me the weight
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 21, 2019, 04:39:12 AM
The weight is 797.5
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Naryar on January 22, 2019, 08:25:07 AM
When showcasing a bot, it is preferable to show/tell what people can't guess, as in armor, weight, and internals, yes.
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Redalert on January 22, 2019, 08:39:10 AM
When showcasing a bot, it is preferable to show/tell what people can't guess, as in armor, weight, and internals, yes.

Yeah, without these major descriptions of the weight and armor, it's like guessing the weight and materials used in a jumbo jet.
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: SagarisRA2 on January 22, 2019, 09:36:38 AM
Big fan of Headache, there's a lack of axe bots that look competitive
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 23, 2019, 09:08:49 AM
Thank you for all that positive reaction :mrgreen: and i will improve the splashes at my next bot
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on January 23, 2019, 09:21:34 AM
When showcasing a bot, it is preferable to show/tell what people can't guess, as in armor, weight, and internals, yes.

Yeah, without these major descriptions of the weight and armor, it's like guessing the weight and materials used in a jumbo jet.
the armor is on the splash
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Redalert on January 23, 2019, 09:23:12 AM
When showcasing a bot, it is preferable to show/tell what people can't guess, as in armor, weight, and internals, yes.
I noticed.
Yeah, without these major descriptions of the weight and armor, it's like guessing the weight and materials used in a jumbo jet.
the armor is on the splash
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Naryar on January 24, 2019, 10:31:53 AM
please do not post when your post content is absolutely nothing
Title: Re: Wambo's DSL/ IRL showcase
Post by: Wambo on October 17, 2019, 08:09:37 AM
  [ You are not allowed to view attachments ]  I am finally back with my showcase. This is my entry for the Orc's wars server contest. For anyone, who doesn't know, what I'm talking about: The Orc wanted us to build a Gnaws family member and made a contest.